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I was a singer
And on one of my consorts
A lady walked up to me

She was sweet
She was pure
And she was in love

We became friends
Close friends
I wrote songs and sung them to her
She listened and commented
It was a good relationship
Or so I thought

She wanted more
She wanted love
But she only got friendship

She stood with me
We laughed
We cried
But I was less knowing
Because she cried more

She loved me
She thought I loved her
She thought the songs were hers
I didn’t know

The years went by
We stand by our songs
But they aren’t for each other
An unwanted misunderstanding

The years continued
We both aged so much
As the years continued
Her light fades

She was on her death bed before she said
“I love you with all my heart”
The words are stuck in my head

People say she died
From a heart attack
If that is so I am the killer
Because I broke that heart

I didn’t know
I didn’t know

When I was walking down the street
Someone came to me
They asked if I was a singer

I replied with no
Not now
Because my songs
Killed a dove.
©2008-2010 ~DarkenWarrior
:icondarkenwarrior:

Author's Comments

this is nothing compared to the orignal version that i thought about when i was walking one night...but I forgot some words and this is what's left

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:icontanaka-kyo:
This is really deep...where did you get the inspiration for this?

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:icondarkenwarrior:
well...i roughly got it from listening...listening to everything...and yet...theres so much...umm...i can't point in a direction....inspiration is the songs i listen to, the people i see, the movies....and...maybe a past life...

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my xbox live account is Darken warrior1 and I am in a clan called Blackwater. we play with real military tactics on several games but when we arent in a clan match or having training we just hang out like friends and always have fun.
:icontanaka-kyo:
And you explanation is even deeper.... I understand what you mean though. just get that feelin ne? I love music, it's my life.

Again, this is a really good one~

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:icondarkenwarrior:
hahaha well I thank you
...yea...at times....at times...well....some darker stuff was inspired by ghostly avenger....i have a sum of one of his novels in my gallery, never turst the chains that bind....but it was when i frist joined...it is messy...

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my xbox live account is Darken warrior1 and I am in a clan called Blackwater. we play with real military tactics on several games but when we arent in a clan match or having training we just hang out like friends and always have fun.
:icontanaka-kyo:
You really have ghost probs? For how long? And is it still as bad as before?

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:icondarkenwarrior:
i don't think i understand...or that is i made you missuderstand...i said ghostly avenger inspired me...not a ghost...well...he is a dark poet/writer....umm....

well...that isn't to say i never had ghosts...at times my door will open at random....even when it is locked....and it always feels like someones watching you around here in my house...mostly at night...and in this one window, after 12 o'clock it looks like theres a alien like figure staring right at you....alittle odd...

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my xbox live account is Darken warrior1 and I am in a clan called Blackwater. we play with real military tactics on several games but when we arent in a clan match or having training we just hang out like friends and always have fun.
:iconpyra-demeitra:
Nice! ^__^

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:icondarkenwarrior:
thanks, i think this is one of the frist times you commented on my work

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my xbox live account is Darken warrior1 and I am in a clan called Blackwater. we play with real military tactics on several games but when we arent in a clan match or having training we just hang out like friends and always have fun.
:icontanaka-kyo:
Oops sorry, I'm a bit slow at times. But I like the darker types of poetry, alot more interesting and deep. I dun like super happy poetry, it just gets old. When I get a chance I'll be sure to check out your other works, seem to be a busy writer!

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:icondarkenwarrior:
hahaha, well i need to write to catch up with the others...infact i don't think i'm that good^^;
...haha...well dark council is always welcome, it is a story of Dortin and his squad the SKO (special killing opertives) ...but don't let the name fool you, it is very interesting...even if i have grammer errors which i should edit out^^;

drakes past, a modern war story at this time...it is one of my more, mean worded deviants

umm...i have some more poems somewhere...so look for em in my gallery...

dark council has intro, 1, 2, and 3
drakes past has 1 and 2
both aren't even close to being finished hahahaha

umm...and thats my gallery as it stands now....haha...

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my xbox live account is Darken warrior1 and I am in a clan called Blackwater. we play with real military tactics on several games but when we arent in a clan match or having training we just hang out like friends and always have fun.

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